SacrilegiouS Posted January 20, 2006 Report Posted January 20, 2006 Prokomentarisite, dajte neku sugestiju... Mindscape Dark thoughts in your mind, shadows swallowing life, possessed by thy power, alone among mankind My second resurrection, all these paths leads to pain, there is no voice from divine, again sick affection Death's final embrace, I can smell that breath, Slowly closing eyes on the sad, tortured face. Bizarre neverending dreams dwelled in damned soul bitter taste of life is place of all my tears. Passion for the weak burns inside this prison Four walls, cries lost in the dark Still I'm One who seek. From the deepest of human brain northern calls are risen dark melody floats trough soul void remember their forgotten names.
Pringler Posted January 20, 2006 Report Posted January 20, 2006 pa sad sve zavisi od muzike u pozadini
SacrilegiouS Posted January 21, 2006 Author Report Posted January 21, 2006 Za sad nema muzike, mozda ce biti uskoro. @black rose tnx:)
Helle Posted January 21, 2006 Report Posted January 21, 2006 Mnogo dobar text, ima stila! Svidja mi se, ovo bi bilo dobro odsvirati kao baladu....
DramatisPersonae Posted January 21, 2006 Report Posted January 21, 2006 e, vala si je dobro nazvao. I prestani da osecash toliko, samo se zbunjujesh.
Narsil Posted January 26, 2006 Report Posted January 26, 2006 Peko ovo si ti pisao tekst??? I kakvu to muziku pominjes?
VOJVODA Posted January 26, 2006 Report Posted January 26, 2006 Sunshine, sunshine reggae... Jedino sto je gluplje od pesme je autor.
Zaznojni Vozac FAP-a Posted January 26, 2006 Report Posted January 26, 2006 E jbg.......Dosta mi je vise filozofije uma i osecanja.... Izvininjavam se autotu,ali stvarno.......
Fiery Posted January 27, 2006 Report Posted January 27, 2006 Mogla bi da se peva. Sto se mene tice, tekstu zamisljenom da se izvodi uz muzicku numeru vise od toga nije potrebno.
Helly ~snowidija~ Posted January 27, 2006 Report Posted January 27, 2006 Sunshine, sunshine reggae... Jedino sto je gluplje od pesme je autor. imash ti neki problem? ...chini mi se da ih imash vishe od jednog.... da vidimo neku tvoju pesmu?! ...ochigledno ti je pisanje pesama ochajno pa ismejavash druge...
Narsil Posted January 27, 2006 Report Posted January 27, 2006 Sunshine, sunshine reggae... Jedino sto je gluplje od pesme je autor. a ko si ti da ocenjujes kakav je autor? pesma je bas super , nije glupa , a ti sto ako ocenjujes druge !!!!!!!
SacrilegiouS Posted January 28, 2006 Author Report Posted January 28, 2006 @lake bodom imam neke ideje za muziku, ali polako... imam sad ispitni rok pa nema sanse nista da radim povodom toga. drago mi je da ti se svidja text @black rose hvala za podrsku, pored ovakvih debila podrska uvek doboro dodje @ vojvoda napisi ti nesto, pa onda pokusaj da budes dovoljno hrabar da to okacis. rekao sam da se prokomentarise pesma, a sto se tice autora mozes samo da mu se sagnes i
Helly ~snowidija~ Posted January 28, 2006 Report Posted January 28, 2006 @lake bodom imam neke ideje za muziku, ali polako... imam sad ispitni rok pa nema sanse nista da radim povodom toga. drago mi je da ti se svidja text @black rose hvala za podrsku, pored ovakvih debila podrska uvek doboro dodje @ vojvoda napisi ti nesto, pa onda pokusaj da budes dovoljno hrabar da to okacis. rekao sam da se prokomentarise pesma, a sto se tice autora mozes samo da mu se sagnes i uvek tu da te branim od "debila" ajde neka neko proba da vredja dok sam ja tu
Narsil Posted January 28, 2006 Report Posted January 28, 2006 @ vojvodo autoru mozes samo da se sagnes
Helly ~snowidija~ Posted January 30, 2006 Report Posted January 30, 2006 a ko si ti da ocenjujes kakav je autor? pesma je bas super , nije glupa , a ti sto ako ocenjujes druge !!!!!!!
SacrilegiouS Posted January 30, 2006 Author Report Posted January 30, 2006 (edited) Hvala svima koji su dali svoje komentare, a posto vidim da imam vec dobar broj pristalica(da ne kazem fanova ), odlucio sam da ostavim ovde jos neke pesmice(koje cine celinu), pa ako vam se i to svidi nastavicemo dalje... Hvala anabel lee i jos jednom hvala black rose za podrsku! From Diary(part I-intro) Vision of a new beginnig shines so brightly in our heart. We will seek for the truth from new start. With tears we are leaving the last colony of Earth Maybe one day our story becomes saga of humanity... Quiet steps to unknown(part II) Slowly we go on road to deepest secrets of human, divided to saints and sinners to faith ones and unbelievers. So many signs, so many stars and just one way to find the truth.. Moving cross the universe trying' to find the similar, eternal searching for deliverance one day will be past. Execution of inspiration, total knowledge desecration, and all those symptoms of human damnation... never forgotten mother earth, beautiful blue oceans, untouched nature, all your frames remain in non-human memory... There are 1000 years since he died, the last who saw your face, we, your sons and daughters, are lost in time and a place! Cosmic elegy(part III) ...And we are running trough the dark in the places where our Sun is just a shining spark... In my hands wooden cross and words that calls Him. But the cosmic elegy is strong, what if this trip is wrong? We know that dark oceans of stars dont forgive If there is a god we would get his message received. Maybe we should die with the rest of a kind Maybe we have cheated rules of the One. Silence surround remains of humanity, great shadow is rising and leading us stray to insanity Death, stars and angels united in One, fear is to weak to say how we feel! Mystic wall guars gates of perception, no chance to enter the other side... Cross is losing meaning cause we are blinded by force much stronger than our God. What's the constitution of ilusion we call life? Are we threat to Creator of Time? ...And we are running trough the dark in the places where our Sun is just a shining spark... Forever! [/i] Edited January 30, 2006 by SacrilegiouS
Helly ~snowidija~ Posted January 30, 2006 Report Posted January 30, 2006 ...And we are running trough the dark in the places where our Sun is just a shining spark... Forever! ja sam tvoj najveci fan! meni prvoj da dash autogram ozbiljno...pesma ti je... odlican kraj...obozavam ga...a i celu pesmu hvala black rose za podrsku! uvek
SacrilegiouS Posted January 31, 2006 Author Report Posted January 31, 2006 ja sam tvoj najveci fan! meni prvoj da dash autogram ozbiljno...pesma ti je... odlican kraj...obozavam ga...a i celu pesmu uvek Hvala, hvala Dogovoricemo se za autogram, mesto i vreme ce biti naknadno objavljeni, a mogu da ti obezbedim da dodjes na red preko reda posto si ipak ti moj najveci fan
Helly ~snowidija~ Posted January 31, 2006 Report Posted January 31, 2006 Hvala, hvala Dogovoricemo se za autogram, mesto i vreme ce biti naknadno objavljeni, a mogu da ti obezbedim da dodjes na red preko reda posto si ipak ti moj najveci fan jupiiiii chast mi je biti tvoj najvechi fan, nosicu tu titulu sa ponosom
Narsil Posted February 1, 2006 Report Posted February 1, 2006 uvek neki debil mora da kvari lepe stvari!!! Ako ti se ne svidja fuck off..... Peko , nisi me obavestio da imas ovako super textove.....moraces da mi pokazes i ostale kad dodjem kod tebe....inace treba da te silujem u star craftu!!!!!!
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