SacrilegiouS Posted November 3, 2006 Report Posted November 3, 2006 Pljunite komentar ako vas ne mrzi. The Eastern Eclipse They came with the rising sun Early as the sky was dark Flames of new day were In the shade of a mighty gun You thought war is over? Again they are rising from dead Last hope or new taste of defeat? No time to think, just take cover! Terror of Lucifer’s smile charges this stormy day I’ve already give omen They are now erased, just part of the file. Animal instinct is highlight of each been The signs of thunder are making my mind darker In the coma of fears, deep inside I’ve know this is already seen. It’s like the first kill To return back is all I need But no one will understand No one know what do I feel The truth is In the ruins of city The truth is In the eyes of defenders When you hear voices giving ode to a new day When you see the ecstasy of staying live You will understand the meaning of the life Eastern eclipse- sacrifice of men Chance to forgive and chance to awake Voices of dark ages- writing new pages Golden ideals are moving away
STARSHOOTER_SUPREME Posted November 4, 2006 Report Posted November 4, 2006 thrash till death\m/ odlican lyric ostavi da ti ovo bude refren Eastern eclipse- sacrifice of men Chance to forgive and chance to awake Voices of dark ages- writing new pages Golden ideals are moving away
Vresište Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 (edited) Jbg. ne dira me...(valjda zbog gramatike i stila i opshteg utiska...) Izvini. Edited November 5, 2006 by matatrtaDgrejt
SacrilegiouS Posted November 6, 2006 Author Report Posted November 6, 2006 (edited) Hvala obojici na kritikama i predlozima. Naravno, matatrtaDgrejt nema potrebe da se izvinjavas. Ovo je, da se tako izrazim, beta verzija, a znam da treba da proradim na gramatici i stilu. Jos jednom hvala, pa se vidimo negde u vremenu SacrilegiouS off Edited November 6, 2006 by SacrilegiouS
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