woman_of_dark_desires Posted January 30, 2007 Report Posted January 30, 2007 Where everything seems To be just fine Where the rivers and trees are alive Everything seems so easy It’s black and white lie You can hear a children’s voices The screaming and crying You can hear them today But tomorrow they are going to die Just like they did before Skeleton of legends that died Wind and rain did blow them away Cursed by the destiny Where is a life now? Standing on the bridge With the dust of the dead Your mind is screaming Rust in peace you will say That him into the waters of mad It comes so fast And it goes just like that Never made to tell the secret So many pours died And there are no stories about them A poet or a song It’s not important meaning now Hold them, take theirs hands Feed their body Feed their brain You can feel them in the dust You can see them in the sky Sad looking little child He has no more tears to cry What was a point of his life Skeleton of legends Sailing on the river of dead You can feel blood and pain Asking for help but no one is there
mara! Posted January 31, 2007 Report Posted January 31, 2007 Lepo je, samo me na nesto strasno podseca, a ne mogu da se setim na sta, pa kad se setim cu dopisati..
Anarki StarScream Posted January 31, 2007 Report Posted January 31, 2007 Zeno mojih snova, imas potencijal.
Jedite Govna Posted February 1, 2007 Report Posted February 1, 2007 zavrsni stih mi se posebno svidio... ujedno kompletna pjesma je odlicno napisana.
VOJVODA Posted February 2, 2007 Report Posted February 2, 2007 Posebno mi se dopadaju sisarke, a i tresnje. A volim ja i krempite.
woman_of_dark_desires Posted February 2, 2007 Author Report Posted February 2, 2007 Posebno mi se dopadaju sisarke, a i tresnje. A volim ja i krempite. Super! i ja volim krempite Inace thnx za vase komentare. @maria blacksmith- Oket!Bas me zanima sta je u tvojoj glavi @Anarki StarScream- HVALA! @Gothic-Rock- thnx moje su omiljene zadnje tri strofe
Fiery Posted February 11, 2007 Report Posted February 11, 2007 http://www.englishlearner.com/ A do tad bar pisi na jeziku koji bolje poznajes.
woman_of_dark_desires Posted February 11, 2007 Author Report Posted February 11, 2007 Ako bas zelis da nekog naucis nesto salji drugima te linkove.Meni nisu potrebni. P.S. Poznajem vise jezika nego sto mislis, tako da ne moras da mi kazes na kojem cu da pisem.
VOJVODA Posted February 12, 2007 Report Posted February 12, 2007 Veruj mi, potrebni su ti. Nije kao horori nekih drugih yum-ovaca, ali treba ti malo da se priucis.
ReMeDy_ Posted February 19, 2007 Report Posted February 19, 2007 Ne svidja mi se poezija koja se ne rimuje... i stvarno bi mogla da overish onaj link, imas gramatickih gresaka. sto se tiche sadrzaja... mozda je lepo napisan, ali lici mi na tipicnu darkgothuberemo pesmu.
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