Anarki StarScream Posted March 2, 2007 Report post Posted March 2, 2007 You think hell is the end You think nothing is worse So will I offend (you?) If I tell you its reverse That you are a liar A hypocritical bastard That never had respect for anything. And when you die, you will meet hellfire This is what you heard? And you shall burn for all your sins? Still believe in that story About grace that you shall receive Let me inform you this is purgatory Punishment for sins is to live This is prison Locked doors, no way out There is no reason So why do you still have doubts? Life is a punishment For all that you do There is no repent God is no fool To live is to suffer So every day is the same Obeying, praying, listening to reverend So who is to blame? When you don't get your ticket to heaven? Will your faith expire? Will you find another messiah? Whom you will respect, love and obey? Will you hold by his skirt? Will you even crawl in dirt? For salvation and wings, whom you will betray? Still believe in that story There is no heaven or hell don’t be naive Let me inform you this is purgatory Punishment for sins is to live This is prison Locked doors, no way out There is no reason So why do you still have doubts? Life is a punishment For all that you do There is no repent God is no fool To live is to suffer Ohrabren velikim recima velikih ljudi ja postovah ovo delo moje ... . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarki StarScream Posted March 4, 2007 Report post Posted March 4, 2007 A u picku materinu hocu da cujem jebeni komentar ... necu vam pretiti smrcu, niti cu vas prijaviti moderatorima ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Smarty Posted March 5, 2007 Report post Posted March 5, 2007 Kada se otreznim, procitacu. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axeanosilas Posted March 5, 2007 Report post Posted March 5, 2007 Само тако настави. Ово баш личи на тебе. СЈАЈНО. Супер. Дивно. Измена: Сад видех о чему си писао. Сотоно! Истини за вољу, ово је боље од претходних радова које си остављао. Покушај да се ослободиш буквалног превођења и слепог поштовања граматичких правила. So why do you still have doubts би се лепше уклопило у ту строфу да си скратио на Why you have doubts... Listening reverend може да стоји без to Капираш о чему причам? Иначе, кривица је индивидуална и човек може кривити само себе... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarki StarScream Posted March 5, 2007 Report post Posted March 5, 2007 Naravno ... ovo je samo doslo dok sam gledao konstantina ... e pa kada pred kraj Gabrijel kaze da ljudi treba da zasluze svoje mesto u raju ... donekle se slazem sa tim ... mislim toliki bi bio idiotizam kada bi na obicno "kajem se" zasluzio mesto pored tog svevisnjeg ... a pre toga si silovao svoju rodjenu cerku i ubio 100000000 ljudi i slicno ... U svakom lsucaju hvala na komentaru . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
greeter of the rising sun Posted March 6, 2007 Report post Posted March 6, 2007 znas kako, svidja mi se, ali mi ne lici na tebe. e sad, sto se tice patnje i odricanja za zivota zarad mesta u raju, ima fora da ako se najokrutniji ubica iskreno pokaje pred smrt, ide pravo u raj i cak ce dobiti bolji status od onog vernika koji je ceo zivot posvetio bogu. nije fer, right? ajd odgledaj film "gutach greha", mozda te to inspirise da napises jos jednu pesku u slicnom fazonu ili dopunis ovu. obrati paznju na onaj deo "And you shall burn for all your sins?"...nesto mi ne zvuci... trebalo je da bude ostro, ali nekako mi ne zvuci.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarki StarScream Posted March 6, 2007 Report post Posted March 6, 2007 Nije ... obe strofe su u ironiji ... jer mi je zaista muka od ljudi koji se trude da "zarade svoje mesto u raju" ... realno ja psujem, zajebavam se, pijem, ne postujem ni oca ni majku ako oni ne postuju mene ... idola imam ( Les Claypool ), nikome necu pomoci ako me je taj nekada zajebao i slicno ... sto ce reci jedno jos nisam nikoga ubio ... ali ni od toga nisam daleko ... ne zavaravam se glupostima da moram striktno da postujem neka pravila ... zivim opusteno i svima uzvracam duplo ... bilo da je dobro ili lose ... i nikada se nisam, niti cu kajati zbog necega ... a svi oni koji idu u crkvu da bi zavrsili u raju su mi licemerni ... "A hypocritical bastard That never had respect for anything." Jer svi oni rade isto sto i ja ... samo ne vide svoje greske ... A inace nije ovo moj stil, istina ... evo sada cu da postujem nesto u mom stilu ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
greeter of the rising sun Posted March 6, 2007 Report post Posted March 6, 2007 ma kapiram ja ironiju (ti drugacije i ne bi mogao:D), samo ne mislim da si u pravu za to da "oni ne vide svoje greske" jer se masa najvecih gresnika upravo i okrece crkvi jer znaju da su cinili greske...to im samo olaksava savest... ublazi malo text i mozes da ga saljes. jesi li prostudirao sajt koji sam ti pomenula? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarki StarScream Posted March 6, 2007 Report post Posted March 6, 2007 Ma tamo cu neku dubokoumnu dvosmislenu pljuvacinu sistema, upakovanu u prozu . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turin Posted March 6, 2007 Report post Posted March 6, 2007 Nije ... obe strofe su u ironiji ... jer mi je zaista muka od ljudi koji se trude da "zarade svoje mesto u raju" ... realno ja psujem, zajebavam se, pijem, ne postujem ni oca ni majku ako oni ne postuju mene ... idola imam ( Les Claypool ), nikome necu pomoci ako me je taj nekada zajebao i slicno ... sto ce reci jedno jos nisam nikoga ubio ... ali ni od toga nisam daleko ... ne zavaravam se glupostima da moram striktno da postujem neka pravila ... zivim opusteno i svima uzvracam duplo ... bilo da je dobro ili lose ... i nikada se nisam, niti cu kajati zbog necega ... a svi oni koji idu u crkvu da bi zavrsili u raju su mi licemerni ... "A hypocritical bastard That never had respect for anything." Jer svi oni rade isto sto i ja ... samo ne vide svoje greske ... A inace nije ovo moj stil, istina ... evo sada cu da postujem nesto u mom stilu ... [sarkazam na racun licemernog ucestvovanja u organizovanoj religiji kod srba, namerno sa malim "s"] Joj, pa ti si druze, satanista! Sta ako cuju babe iz tvoje zgrade? Ima da ti daju urokljivo oko kad god te sretnu na hodniku i da ti okrecu svecu u crkvi, a mozda ce i pop da te pogleda popreko sledeci put kad ga budes video da se vozi u velikom belom mercedesu (novom). [/sarkazam na racun licemernog ucestvovanja u organizovanoj religiji kod srba, namerno sa malim "s"] ovde bi odgovarao i citat Leonarda Koena, po secanju, ima gresaka: "Skrenuo bih paznju upravi da u picu ima vode, da devojka zaduzena za sesire ima sifilis, i da se orkestar sastoji od bivsih SS cudovista Pa ipak, posto je ovo novogodisnja noc, i ja imam tumor na dusi, stavicu papirnatu kapu na svoj potres mozga i zaigrati" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarki StarScream Posted March 6, 2007 Report post Posted March 6, 2007 :) nisam ja satanista ... aj u zdravlje . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inuria Malkava Posted March 6, 2007 Report post Posted March 6, 2007 Kad porastem, pisacu tekstove death metal bendovima. Sala mala, posalica. Dobar si. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
+AuReOlE= Posted March 6, 2007 Report post Posted March 6, 2007 Fino Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turin Posted March 8, 2007 Report post Posted March 8, 2007 (edited) da bi pisao tekstove death metal bendovima mora da pocne da koristi reci duze od 8 slova i da ih stavlja tamo gde se nisu nadale da ce se naci. primer: Refrigeration, diffraction coaxial liberation Dying on the eye of nations Ruin the world in everlasting oppalescence of broken coprophagic residual transmittance AAaaaaargh (growl incomprehensible until drummer gets a carpal tunnel syndrome) znas kako kazu da je Strömblad prevodio Fridenove rane tekstove sa svedskog na engleski. cini mi se pre da ga je mrzelo da trazi po recniku, pa je nasumice ubadao. Edited March 8, 2007 by HowlingWind Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minerva_SD Posted March 8, 2007 Report post Posted March 8, 2007 And when you die, you will meet hellfire Dobro je, samo nije dozvoljena upotreba buduceg vremena nakon temporala, sredi gramatiku i bice super. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarki StarScream Posted March 9, 2007 Report post Posted March 9, 2007 Hvala 3 suze, howling i tebi Aureoie ... Nimfadora i tebi na savetu, tu je trebao da ide znak pitanja ... zaboravio sam da stavim ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minerva_SD Posted March 11, 2007 Report post Posted March 11, 2007 Nije samo znak pitanja, nego, prosto, engleska gramatika (ako zelis da sve bude jezicki cisto) ne dozvoljava upotrbu buduceg vremena nakon temporala. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarki StarScream Posted March 11, 2007 Report post Posted March 11, 2007 Aha ... naravno da zelim ... jebeno sam opsednut sa perfekcijom ... hvala ... nisam to znao . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minerva_SD Posted March 12, 2007 Report post Posted March 12, 2007 I samo jos jedna sugestija, ako nemas nista protiv? Koristis shall za drugo lice, a on se koristi samo za prvo. S tim sto je tendencija u savremenom engleskom jeziku da se vise skoro uopste ne upotrebljava, cak ni za prvo lice, tj. svuda ga menja will, premda nije neispravna upotreba u prvom licu, za sva ostala lica jeste. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarki StarScream Posted March 12, 2007 Report post Posted March 12, 2007 Znam, to je moguce da sam podsvesno napisao ... Uh, idem sada da vidim kakvu mi je pljuvacnu napisao howling wind na novom tekstu x). Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minerva_SD Posted March 13, 2007 Report post Posted March 13, 2007 Slobodno salji na lekturu kad napises nesto... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarki StarScream Posted March 13, 2007 Report post Posted March 13, 2007 Ohoho ... ne treba meni lektor ... imam jednog na faksu ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minerva_SD Posted March 13, 2007 Report post Posted March 13, 2007 No hurt feelings, ali imas dosta gramatici neispravnih stvari... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarki StarScream Posted March 13, 2007 Report post Posted March 13, 2007 Ma znam za ovaj tekst ... kao sto rekoh ovde postujem tekstove za koje nisam siguran ... a mrzi me da ih menjam ... prokleto sam lenj ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minerva_SD Posted March 13, 2007 Report post Posted March 13, 2007 As you wish... Rece, imas lektora na faksu? Jel to znaci da si na Filoloskom? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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