Adam Posted March 7, 2007 Report Posted March 7, 2007 Grain of Dust No one told me about it the day I slamed that wooden door, how I was gonna find it we told our lies long time before. Once we gonna meet again on this endless bloodie road, grain of dust beaneath the stain looking for the truth facing the flood. Poor,poor and helpless poor,poor,poor.... all those years and all those dreams was it realy worth being so alone poor .... Does it something mean to you although you re caryng that empty head someone already pushed the buton,, but I am tired of being sad. But I could have never understand why we are caryng these heavy bags do you realy think that we'd still belong to some land if we'd have put dawn the flags.
Anarki StarScream Posted March 11, 2007 Report Posted March 11, 2007 (edited) ... mene mrzelo da postujem, posto sam obecao sebi da necu da dajem lose komentare ... Bloody se pise krvavo Beneath se pise ispod I slammed se pise zalupiti. I moguce je da ima jos koja greska u kucanju, nisam primetio ... Jel' ti to sazaljevas sebe u ovoj pesmi? Lepa majica na avataru . Edited March 11, 2007 by Anarki StarScream
Adam Posted March 11, 2007 Author Report Posted March 11, 2007 Mrzelo me da ispravljam kad sam prekucao....
Anarki StarScream Posted March 11, 2007 Report Posted March 11, 2007 Manje vise to, odgovori na pitanje. Ti to sebe sazaljevas u pesmi?
Adam Posted March 14, 2007 Author Report Posted March 14, 2007 Ne, ne sazaljevam, mozda tako ti se cini, ali odgovor je negativan...
Face Of Melinda Posted March 31, 2007 Report Posted March 31, 2007 Ne, ne sazaljevam, mozda tako ti se cini, ali odgovor je negativan... En general pesma mi se svidja... jesdnostavna je. Dobar text za neku doom-goth-pesmu?
Rob Swire Posted April 5, 2007 Report Posted April 5, 2007 probaj da izbegavas direktne rime. bad sad, understand,land. postoji rima po sluhu, a kada to koristis, siri je dijapazon reci koje mozes da koristis, a samim tim, mozes biti mnogo originalniji. pozz
Fiery Posted April 7, 2007 Report Posted April 7, 2007 I pokusaj da razmisljas na engleskom kada pises na engleskom. Ovo je samo srpski sa drugim recima.
Adam Posted June 25, 2007 Author Report Posted June 25, 2007 Mama I miss you tonight Maybe I'm not the one that You wanted me to be, Sometimes I just feel so lonely, although I feel free. Time has left the marks, And you can see them in the light, Mother I miss you tonight, I know daddy is now working all day long, you are gettin' trough and I wish I was that strong, it's our kitchen that you are in, and I know you're alright. Mother I miss you tonight. I'm in a foreign land, And I know you'd understand, The way I feel is ussual, Somethimes I just need you as a friend. Sombody as you to talk, Not to argue or to fight. Mother I miss you tonight. I've hurt so many people, But I've been hurted too, And I'm greatfull to the God, He's takin' care of you, I shouldn't work that much, I need some time to write, Mother I miss you tonight
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