RAMBO! Posted April 11, 2008 Report Posted April 11, 2008 ova nastala pre pola sata...znam da ima greshaka,nije mi dobar engleski(ispravite ako ima greshaka(ima ih )): MASSACRE-NO BOUNDAIRES KILLING IS MY JOB WORKIN HARDLY EVERY DAY NOW I AM ADULT MAN ONE WICTIM ISN'T ENOUGHT EVERY DAY FAMMILE ONE ITS MY DOSE OF BLOOD LOOK AT YOURSELF YOU PITFUEL THINK THAT YOU ARE MURDER ONLY FEW SECOND YOU WAS DRUNK IN AFFECT KILLING ONLY ONE MAN AND YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT THE EVIL MEAN MASSACRE IS MY DAILY THING MY LIFE IS PURE EVIL I DON'T KNOW FOR HAPPYNESS AND FOR EMOTION COLD LIKE STONE WHEN I KILLING POLICE ARE UNEFFECTIVE HUNTING CAUSE AM I NOW INNVISIBLE INNVISIBLE LIKE DRIVE LIKE DRIVE FOR DEATH I AM PURE DRIVE I AM PURE WISH FOR... MASSACRE! MASSACRE! MASSACRE! MA-SSA-CRE! JUGDEING BY MY NOTEBOOK; YOU WILL BE DEATH BY THE CHRISTMAS! (DO YOU FEEL WIND IN YOUR NECK? TURN AROUND,LOOK IN THE EYES OF DEATH, SOON YOU AND ALL YOU LOV WOULD'T BE ALIVE LOOK IN ME,I WANT TO SOAP, EVERY ATOM OF DEADLY FEAR!) 9
ilegalac Posted July 19, 2008 Report Posted July 19, 2008 Ja ne znam engleski, prevedi na srpski, mozda i dam komentar.
Lukijan Mušicki Posted July 20, 2008 Report Posted July 20, 2008 Majko moja! Maaaajko moja! sta je ovo koju picku materinu, ko je pis'o ovaj tekst! sta da ti kazem, nista posebno... kao ni ovo sto sam ja napisao jos jedna obrada od mene (ima jos jedna na temi "moja pesma") Maaaajko moja! koja OVO JE budalastina! Pamet.... sta je to kog djavola? inteligencija nam nije jaca strana (nestala?) Buducnost za nas nije problem - nemamo je mislimo samo sta cemo da pijemo i duvamo samo zatvori oci i prepusti se carima koje ti pruzaju pivo i trava potpunu slobodu i svu srecu! to je ono zasto nas ne razumeju, ne vole! Ponekad mislim da je nasa misija nemoguca, a onda popijem par piva, znaci i vizija mi kazu da ce nas neko razumeti ali to ce biti samo jedan Maaaajko moja! - zajedno smo ovde (niko nas ne razume) Maaaajko moja! - sto koju picku materinu ja pevam ovo!? (Satyricon - Mother North cover) 2
oʞɾoƃ Posted August 15, 2008 Report Posted August 15, 2008 Engleski ti je... Pa, nije sigurno na zavidnom nivou.
Vresište Posted August 18, 2008 Report Posted August 18, 2008 ova nastala pre pola sata...znam da ima greshaka,nije mi dobar engleski(ispravite ako ima greshaka(ima ih )): MASSACRE-NO BOUNDAIRES KILLING IS MY JOB WORKIN HARDLY EVERY DAY NOW I AM ADULT MAN ONE WICTIM ISN'T ENOUGHT EVERY DAY FAMMILE ONE ITS MY DOSE OF BLOOD LOOK AT YOURSELF YOU PITFUEL THINK THAT YOU ARE MURDER ONLY FEW SECOND YOU WAS DRUNK IN AFFECT KILLING ONLY ONE MAN AND YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT THE EVIL MEAN MASSACRE IS MY DAILY THING MY LIFE IS PURE EVIL I DON'T KNOW FOR HAPPYNESS AND FOR EMOTION COLD LIKE STONE WHEN I KILLING POLICE ARE UNEFFECTIVE HUNTING CAUSE AM I NOW INNVISIBLE INNVISIBLE LIKE DRIVE LIKE DRIVE FOR DEATH I AM PURE DRIVE I AM PURE WISH FOR... MASSACRE! MASSACRE! MASSACRE! MA-SSA-CRE! JUGDEING BY MY NOTEBOOK; YOU WILL BE DEATH BY THE CHRISTMAS! (DO YOU FEEL WIND IN YOUR NECK? TURN AROUND,LOOK IN THE EYES OF DEATH, SOON YOU AND ALL YOU LOV WOULD'T BE ALIVE LOOK IN ME,I WANT TO SOAP, EVERY ATOM OF DEADLY FEAR!) Najvecha greshka je shto si se odvazhio da postujesh....
Милица Posted August 18, 2008 Report Posted August 18, 2008 Hahahahaha!!! :) Ovo je toliko debilno da je sjajno... Molim te reci samo da se zajebavas, i svaka ti cast u tom slucaju... A greske su ti neverovatne... Mada, bilo bi steta da ih ispravis, ovako se zaista postize pun efekat... Savrseno idu uz ovakvu pesmu...
Axeanosilas Posted August 18, 2008 Report Posted August 18, 2008 (edited) Немој да те обесхрабре ови хејтери. Само настави да пишеш и читај, читај, читај... Нарочито упутства за веш машине и садржај шампона и козметике док седиш на шољи. Aјс је то урадио па је направио хит - "Фелче азуро, паљери ди бањо, туто ил копро мон вида парфумато, ликвидо сапоне, секрето моменто, дуе тре, кватро тре, ћинквећенто". Не сумњам да ћеш наћи инспирацију за квалитетнија дела од овог твог (ако је то уопште могуће)... Држ' се Рамбо! Сам против свих, тако си увек и радио! Edited August 18, 2008 by Axeanosilas
Thule Posted August 19, 2008 Report Posted August 19, 2008 CAUSE AM I NOW INNVISIBLE INNVISIBLE LIKE DRIVE LIKE DRIVE FOR DEATH I AM PURE DRIVE JUGDEING BY MY NOTEBOOK; YOU WILL BE DEATH BY THE CHRISTMAS! (DO YOU FEEL WIND IN YOUR NECK? LOOK IN ME,I WANT TO SOAP, EVERY ATOM OF DEADLY FEAR!) Još uvijek kontempliram kako je neko mogao napisati nešto ovoliko fantastično.
vudun Posted August 20, 2008 Report Posted August 20, 2008 Боундаирес! Рамбо је цар. Нарочито у трећој изведби.
Dead Man Walking Posted August 21, 2008 Report Posted August 21, 2008 "YOU PITFUEL THINK THAT YOU ARE MURDER" ovo ima da ode kod mene u potpis
Andrija Smith Posted August 21, 2008 Report Posted August 21, 2008 Još uvijek kontempliram kako je neko mogao napisati nešto ovoliko fantastično. :lol: Umirem :lol:
RAMBO! Posted August 23, 2008 Author Report Posted August 23, 2008 Sudeci po rokovniku,pardon postovima,vidim da vam se jako dopadaju moji stihovi. Tako i treba da bude jer RAMBO restura!!!! Ochekujte uskoro novu pesmu,punu nasilja,straha,sviperog ponashanja i ubijanja!!! buahahahaha!
Милица Posted August 23, 2008 Report Posted August 23, 2008 Jedva cekam!!! Ali nemoj da bude losija od ove... Nemoj slucajno da bi se priblizavao engleskim recnicima i gramatikama dok je ne napises, ne bih zelela da uniste tvoj stvaralacki zanos nekim prizemnim stvarima kao npr. pravopis, slaganje vremena, red reci u recenici i slicno... I naravno, nadam se da ces i u svom drugom remek-delu ostati ovako beskompromisan i opasan po zivote smrtnika, kao i u prvom
Axeanosilas Posted August 23, 2008 Report Posted August 23, 2008 (edited) Ochekujte uskoro novu pesmu,punu nasilja,straha,sviperog ponashanja i ubijanja!!! Животе мој напаћени, сунце смисла огреја те!!! Пожури молим те, не дозволи да изгорим(о) од ишчекивања. Блек метал ист криг! Edited August 23, 2008 by Axeanosilas
vudun Posted August 23, 2008 Report Posted August 23, 2008 AM I EWILL? YESS I AM! ... ubaci i zaklane jariće, više gromova i munja, i poneku nesretnu devicu! PoZ!
Andrija Smith Posted August 23, 2008 Report Posted August 23, 2008 Obavezno poslusaj ove savete, i cekamo novu pesmicu
Axeanosilas Posted August 23, 2008 Report Posted August 23, 2008 (edited) Још само да додам да ти је место у издању које буде обрађивало период између 1920 и 2010 загарантовано. Небитно што пишеш на енглеском. Edited August 23, 2008 by Axeanosilas
Uruk Posted August 24, 2008 Report Posted August 24, 2008 Napred Rambo, svim srcem smo uz tebe i sa velikim zarom iscekujemo novu pesmu. Pozuri molim te.
Vresište Posted August 25, 2008 Report Posted August 25, 2008 Nasapunjaj svaki atom smrtnog straha... 1
Guest Lukas Ацовић Posted August 25, 2008 Report Posted August 25, 2008 Nishta ti to nevalja dechko! moracesh kod marine tucakovic, malo na obuku.
RAMBO! Posted August 28, 2008 Author Report Posted August 28, 2008 ... ubaci i zaklane jariće, ima jarica(na engleskom se kazu bily-goat da se zna!),i to ne bilo kakvih,nego religiozno orijentisanih UPCOMIG' DEVASTATION SOMETIMES I CATCH MYSELF LOOK TROO WINDOW HAPPY FAMILLIE THEY DID NOT KNOW,THEY DID NOT ANTICIPATE AN UPCOMING DEVASTATION THAT NEAR I ENTER TROO WALL,SPEED OF LIGHT BEFORE THEY REALIZE WHAT IS HAPPEN THEY ARE DEAD FOWL BAWL IN THE GARDEN BULETS IS MAKE RED PARADE IN AIR LED IS IN THE EVERY ROOM SCREAMS EXITS FROMS DYINGS BODIES I DRINK MY DOUSE OF DEADLY FEAR LIFE ARE SPIL ON THE GRUOND LEAK TOGETER WITH BLOOD NOW YOUR SOULS FELL UNLIMITED PAIN YOU LOOK YOUR CHILDREN DYING YOU LOKK THEM LITTLE EYES,LAST TIME OPEN SOON YOUR SOULS FALL INTO AMBISS OF DEATH WORLD OF ETERNAL SILENCE-YOR ONLY HOPE BRUTAL IS TOTAL BLOD FALL FROM NOW MOTLEY CEILING THAT FALL ON MY HAND WHICH ARE PRES TRIGER TRIGER THAT SEAL YOUR DESTINI NOW LIFE LEAVED THAT HOUSE BUT IS IN THE ME IS STILL MORE ANGER THIS JOB ISNT SATISFAJA MY KILL DESIRE I WILL BORED SO I DEICIDE TO SHOOT IN THEY DEAD BODIES TO COMPARE HOUSE WITH GROUND NO STONE TO STONE TO STAY ON CAUSE BORED PRIEST AND LITLE BILY-GOAT BAPTIZE 5
Andrija Smith Posted August 29, 2008 Report Posted August 29, 2008 I eto nama jos jednog masterpiece-a! Svaka cast Rambo, samo tako nastavi, cekamo nove pesme!
vudun Posted August 29, 2008 Report Posted August 29, 2008 Е јебига, прва му је била више труе! Ова има доста мање грешака у компарацији са оном .... с' претходне стране.
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